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摘要:托福考试想写出好作文,就要不断借鉴高分作文的成功案例,积累自己的作文技巧,在此小编整理一些高分案例供各位考生欣赏,希望对各位考生有所帮助。 A company has announced that it

  托福考试想写出好作文,就要不断借鉴高分作文的成功案例,积累自己的作文技巧,在此小编整理一些高分案例供各位考生欣赏,希望对各位考生有所帮助。

  A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

  写作思路:

  先说明优势和劣势,让后说同意建一个工厂

  (1)工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业,对地方的经济有很大的贡献

  (2)建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展,例如小商店,药店等等,这可以大大方便附近的居民

  (3)建造工厂,赢利后,就可以向当地政府贡献税收,政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务

  参考范文:

  New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.

  I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise.

  Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.

  I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I mould miss that greatly.

  A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.

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